Subject: three things on the [business name] website

Hi [first name],

I checked [business name]'s website on [date]. Three things stand out:

1. [Finding, in plain words]
   [One sentence on why it matters to the business]

2. [Finding, in plain words]
   [One sentence on why it matters to the business]

3. [Finding, in plain words]
   [One sentence on why it matters to the business]

[Review count] reviews on Google. Profile [claimed / not claimed].

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